Mood and Voice

It's been a long damned day -- a long year, a long life.  If you know someone unaffected by the twitching economy, offer them a sandwich because they have nothing.  While you're at it, I'll take a PB&J.

Read the torrent of commentary on the web and it seems all anyone wants in this market is commercial paranormal romance with a gut-grabbing opening, a constant fast-paced easy read that doesn't require you have a dictionary nearby, and maybe a soft grade of paper because you're never gonna want to read such tripe again, and will probably burn through a chapter every time your bowels move, so it might as well do double duty.

Do you hear the frustration? The snarky tone? Is this edgy enough, or do I need to throw in more profanity?

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I love doing that. String together cliché words and phrases and make something recognizable. Fun! Admittedly, it can be a bit trickier to write in a mood you don't currently share, but hey, authors are actors, playing every character in the book. Sometimes you have to get into the part!

It's like writing poetry; dirge of woe or ode to joy, we take words and weave a mood. It's what makes or breaks a story, but I have a quote for you:

"A only writer begins a book; a reader finished it." - Samuel Johnson

• Take the top section and read it with the mindset of gloom and a long face and it comes out one way.
• Go back and apply grumpy anger and it comes out differently.
• Try again with resigned humor and it shifts yet again.

The reader is under no obligation to think of what the writer was imagining. My favorite example: J.R.R. Tolkien, creator of Middle Earth in which THE HOBBIT, LORD OF THE RINGS, and of course THE SILMARILLION occur, was a master of this idea.

Do Balrogs have wings? It's a topic people rage over (yes, maybe only geeks, but they are a significant market...)  Look at the argument and some discussion of each side HERE. The answer is, they do if you imagined them that way while reading the passages. Or don't if you didn't.  Your book, your world, your choice. The author did not choose to decide for you.

Yep, I really said it.

So when you buy a book, think of it as unfinished furniture you still have to paint.  The author wrote the words, but you have to give them breath and life.